Great column :) I hope you do get to do the current project -- from what you've said so far, it sounds like great fun!
I think I may be having the same problem. I got a rejection letter earlier this week -- a really lovely letter, a thoughtful and personal letter from the agent I'd queried -- which said that s/he* thought that the concept and plotting sounded "exquisite" and "right up [his/her] alley", and that I am "clearly a very talented writer", but that the language was "too austere for the YA market". In other words, it sounds like a great book, but I'm pretty sure I'd never sell it. I'm encouraged by the commendation of concept and plotting, which I thought were the weak points; but although of course there's trimming and shaping and pruning to be done, I don't think I could write about these characters in any other sort of language. Odd how a letter can be so encouraging and so discouraging at the same time :)
* Yes, I know which it is ;), I'm just trying to be a little discreet.
That rejection letter sounds interesting. It's one of those comments that can go either way--if you agree then you can consider reworking the project, but if you're satisfied with the language, then my advice would be to just print off a clean copy and send it out to the next agent on your list. What one agent considers "austere" another agent (or editor) might enjoy.
Individual taste plays a huge role in agents' decisions--I've seen this many times, where several agents pass on a story, before it finds the right agent who loves the story and is able to sell it.
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Date: 2007-09-06 01:25 pm (UTC)I wish you well with your next endeavor, and I hope that you can balance the two aspects of writing--commercialism and creativity--continually.
Catherine
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Date: 2007-09-06 01:37 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-06 02:00 pm (UTC)I think I may be having the same problem. I got a rejection letter earlier this week -- a really lovely letter, a thoughtful and personal letter from the agent I'd queried -- which said that s/he* thought that the concept and plotting sounded "exquisite" and "right up [his/her] alley", and that I am "clearly a very talented writer", but that the language was "too austere for the YA market". In other words, it sounds like a great book, but I'm pretty sure I'd never sell it. I'm encouraged by the commendation of concept and plotting, which I thought were the weak points; but although of course there's trimming and shaping and pruning to be done, I don't think I could write about these characters in any other sort of language. Odd how a letter can be so encouraging and so discouraging at the same time :)
* Yes, I know which it is ;), I'm just trying to be a little discreet.
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Date: 2007-09-06 02:19 pm (UTC)Individual taste plays a huge role in agents' decisions--I've seen this many times, where several agents pass on a story, before it finds the right agent who loves the story and is able to sell it.
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Date: 2007-09-06 02:54 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-07 03:03 pm (UTC)