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pbray ([personal profile] pbray) wrote2007-06-30 10:23 am
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Bless me for I have committed cliche

OMG, I'm writing a fragment of an original poem to put in my fantasy novel. Can I be any more cliched?

P.S. I'm crap at poetry. This is going to suck even more than my prose.

[identity profile] melissajm.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 02:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I once wrote a story that included a truly awful poem that I made with magnetic poetry. It not only sold, it got my first good review. Of course, the poem was supposed to be dreadful...

[identity profile] pbray.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee!

This poetry is supposed to be good--but I'm cheating since the part I'm including is described as a translation of the original, and thus any suckiness can be put down to a poor translation.

[identity profile] melissajm.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 06:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Clever! ;)

[identity profile] quietselkie.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 03:02 pm (UTC)(link)
It's not an endless Elf Ballad or Dirge, is it?

[identity profile] pbray.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
It's only two lines. I do have my standards :-)

[identity profile] pbray.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 04:05 pm (UTC)(link)
BTW, originally it was going to be longer, but after half an hour I realized that I'd already reached maximum suck with two lines and couldn't come up with anything else to add that I didn't hate. So now I have a poem fragment.

[identity profile] quietselkie.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 05:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Whew! Hahaha!

[identity profile] eeknight.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Just do it and let the chips fall, if it seems right for the story.

[identity profile] pbray.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I can count on my editor to let me know if I went totally off track.

[identity profile] gerbilicous.livejournal.com 2007-06-30 08:47 pm (UTC)(link)
So long as you're not rhyming "dragon" with "flagon", I think we're ok!

[identity profile] pbray.livejournal.com 2007-07-01 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
*winces* Yeah, that would be pretty bad.

But I'm sure I did it (or something similar) back when I was writing poetry as a teen....
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[personal profile] larryhammer 2007-06-30 08:59 pm (UTC)(link)
*cackles* Vee VILL drag you ofer to the werse side of the force!

---L.

[identity profile] pbray.livejournal.com 2007-07-01 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
Nooo!

[identity profile] pbray.livejournal.com 2007-07-01 12:47 pm (UTC)(link)
BTW, you should know that one of my first thoughts was "OMG, I'll die if Larry ever sees this crap."

[identity profile] jlawrenceperry.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 03:05 pm (UTC)(link)
The vessel with the pestle has the pellet with the poison
The flagon with the dragon has the brew that is true!

[identity profile] pbray.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Can't you just see that as a clue in a Harry Potter-ripoff?

[identity profile] jlawrenceperry.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 04:33 pm (UTC)(link)
I would be more offended at the rip-off of a Danny Kaye movie...