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Critiquing gone wild
Aug. 5th, 2006 09:01 amBest line from last night's gathering of the Lemonaders-- ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
jpsorrow's Dungeon of Pain critique service. Complete with cheesy dialogue:
"I'll show you a dangling participle-" *whip cracks*
jpsorrow's Dungeon of Pain critique service. Complete with cheesy dialogue:"I'll show you a dangling participle-" *whip cracks*
