Bless me for I have committed cliche

[pbray]

OMG, I'm writing a fragment of an original poem to put in my fantasy novel. Can I be any more cliched?

P.S. I'm crap at poetry. This is going to suck even more than my prose.

Comments

[quietselkie.livejournal.com]

It's not an endless Elf Ballad or Dirge, is it?

[pbray.livejournal.com]

It's only two lines. I do have my standards :-)

[pbray.livejournal.com]

BTW, originally it was going to be longer, but after half an hour I realized that I'd already reached maximum suck with two lines and couldn't come up with anything else to add that I didn't hate. So now I have a poem fragment.

[quietselkie.livejournal.com]

Whew! Hahaha!